Broken Chain: critical thinking

  Alfonso's feeling have many similarties compare with girls. For example: he really cares about his looking and what other people thinks about him. Alfonso has spent a lot of time on making himself look good. He study hair style, push his teeth, do pushups, and also punch himself to practice his endurance. I think a little bit of concerning about your looking is ok, but not too over. Like what Alfonso did, I think that is too much. I think you should do something more valueable instead of wasting time on pushing your teeth and smiling to the mirror. You can go out and play with your friends, read some books, or go the gym.
  Girls and Boys have a lot of similarties, but they also have a lot of differences. Like boys want to be handsome, but girls want to be beatiful. In today's english class, we have discussed about girls and boys. Girls in our class think that a handsome man should be tall, beatiful nose, six petal, blond hair, and also big eyes. Boys in our class think that a handsome man should be tall, natural hair, and normal size eyes. From the discussion in english class, we can see the different feeling between boys and girls.
  I don't really care a lot about my looking and popularity. I won't push my teeth, do fifty times pushup, punch yourself, or smile to the mirror. The things I care more are my homework, watching TV and play computer, and play chess with my eighbor friend. Well, different people have different feeling and habits.